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Fetch (Free verse) by Limness Go dog, go!
Dammit, I said, GO!
What good is this dog?
Loyal and dumb
I throw the damn stick,
He don't even run.
I'm bringing him back to the pound
Up the ladder:
Highgate Cemetery
Down the ladder:
Bittersweet Emotions
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Posted: August 27, 2002 11:56 AM PDT; Last modified: August 27, 2002 11:56 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7526 Comments:
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god'swife @ 209.179.212.43
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27-Aug-02/11:25 PM
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a good laugh. 6. Could be expanded, He shits on the carpet, my shoes are all ripped, He knocked down my Gra'ma, and shattered her hip.
excellent suggestion. here's my stanza: he don't bark at strangers/he don't chase the cat/ the mailman's his friend/what's up with that??
He's a flea ridden mongrel, his fart's make me weep, he's licking his balls all night long, I can't sleep!
he dug up the yard/he chewed my damn slippers/ he ate all the garbage/except for the kippers...
"He ain't never caught a rabbit and he ain't no friend of mine."
Oh, wait... crap. Forget I said that. I think it's better short anyway. It shows that it dosn't take much to incur the author's wrath. The attitude is brilliant.
Excellent, I've had one as well.
He's a basket case short of his bed He walks backwards while wagging his head.
"She shit on the carpet; She shit on the bed; I have the solution--a blow to the head."
I hope they don't run out, elsen I'll be in some big trouble! 7/10
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