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Fetch (Free verse) by Limness

Go dog, go! Dammit, I said, GO! What good is this dog? Loyal and dumb I throw the damn stick, He don't even run. I'm bringing him back to the pound

Shin-Bojangles 28-Aug-02/12:03 AM
"He ain't never caught a rabbit and he ain't no friend of mine."
Oh, wait... crap. Forget I said that.

I think it's better short anyway. It shows that it dosn't take much to incur the author's wrath. The attitude is brilliant.




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