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Fetch (Free verse) by Limness

Go dog, go! Dammit, I said, GO! What good is this dog? Loyal and dumb I throw the damn stick, He don't even run. I'm bringing him back to the pound

god'swife 27-Aug-02/11:25 PM
a good laugh. 6. Could be expanded, He shits on the carpet, my shoes are all ripped, He knocked down my Gra'ma, and shattered her hip.




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