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Fetch (Free verse) by Limness

Go dog, go! Dammit, I said, GO! What good is this dog? Loyal and dumb I throw the damn stick, He don't even run. I'm bringing him back to the pound

<~> 27-Aug-02/11:30 PM
excellent suggestion. here's my stanza: he don't bark at strangers/he don't chase the cat/ the mailman's his friend/what's up with that??




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