Re: Tommy, an opera in D minor, by Vagina the 3 legg'd pigeon by <{Baba^Yaga}>	25-Jun-03/10:41 PM
Oh, yes, I forgot something. Like i told dark, i did not just recently start. I recently started taking it seriously is all. Btw: http://www.100free.com/rehash2888s/ (Nearly complete collection of written work, started when age 14 to now, age 17) Heres more ammo captain. dissect some more.
Re: Mistaken Battlefields by Brian Tiensvold	25-Jun-03/11:20 PM
yes, multipersonality.. confusing and effective. lalala.
Re: Untitled by no1sangelz23	25-Jun-03/11:22 PM
hrmm. good.
Re: My Back Fat by charlie busted	26-Jun-03/8:51 PM
Amusing and well presented.
Re: At Peace by Elvish Jade	26-Jun-03/8:52 PM
Indeed.
Re: Friends? by Elvish Jade	26-Jun-03/8:55 PM
Blessed with a nine.
regarding some deleted poem...	26-Jun-03/8:58 PM
I require hands to clap loud in the theater of language, so this made me sing shouts of "Bravo".
Re: -=Dark_Angel_Is_No_Longer_Funny=- by wEdible Underpantsw	26-Jun-03/9:03 PM
humm... umm. -shrug- is this commentry or poetry, because now i cant decide, it gets confusing..
Re: i gotta sign by helpfulpoems	26-Jun-03/9:05 PM
Teenage style.. yes, and your slogan should be "Preppy Boi"
Re: The Twenty-Fifth of Whenevber by OneFingerAnswer	26-Jun-03/9:14 PM
Whenevber? that could easy confuse a crowd if you ever plan to read this out loud. "So why isn't going that easy?" -- Notice that this line sticks out like a thorn? fragmented.. -So why isn't it going that easy- just a suggestion anyway. with those issues out of the way, i enjoyed this poem. blessed with an 8
Re: Cancer (Lyric) by Twiggy by Shardik	26-Jun-03/9:15 PM
lmao.
Re: On Someone's Dick by JoyLuck	28-Jun-03/12:45 AM
lmao. oki doki. blessed with 8.
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Jun-03/12:48 AM
Hmmm. ;) blessed with 10.
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Jun-03/12:50 AM
blessed with 10.
Re: shadows of love by crwncka1	28-Jun-03/5:38 AM
Well written indeed. Blessed with 8.
Re: hurricane love by crwncka1	28-Jun-03/5:43 AM
Subject: cliche, I've seen thousands like it. 7
Re: Standing by the Sea by thepinkbunnyofdoom	30-Jun-03/12:57 PM
hrmm. interesting and perhaps funny.. but it lackes a certain spontaneous quality, because your title already layed out the end, or gave enough info for me to guess it. The final moral that you give for a conclusion, is a simple spurt of common sense. Then you attempted to make the last line catchy and funny.. but it ended up being boringly unamusing. I like the story you did spin out though, except for the insane "form" we have here.. your lines are running all over the place.. what purpose does that exactly serve? to make reading the work annoying enough as to drive people to become lazy and not read it?
Re: STIGMA / MUSEHEART by JoyLuck	30-Jun-03/2:49 PM
lmao. blessed with 10.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Jul-03/6:01 PM
im slightly puzzled with this poem..
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Jul-03/6:07 PM
what the fuck.. are you going to commit suicide with this poem? because looking over the poetic talent here on poem ranker, i forsee a scene: An arrogant young self-proclaimed Caesar suffering delusions of granduer raising his sword to poke a dwarf which is in actuality a giant, but his hallucenagenic suffering prevents his realization of the creatures size and strength. Suddenly the giant awakens in rage with a burning sensation originating from his arse.. turns to see so-called caesar and joyfully steps on him, thinking of memories which include cockroaches.