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My Back Fat (Free verse) by charlie busted I am in love,
though its friends that I lack,
with 100 kilos of fat,
hanging around my back.
I used to be ashamed,
I was always straight laced,
now I just buy trousers,
with a higher waist.
Some think that Im a freak,
Children point and they laugh,
but they can't see my real shame
when I give myself an accidental golden bath.
Up the ladder:
Pushed Too Far
Down the ladder:
When Fairy Tales Forgive Us
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Posted: June 26, 2003 10:02 AM PDT; Last modified: June 26, 2003 10:02 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.9663825 Overall Rank: 8507 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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26-Jun-03/1:45 PM
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A chipper poem indeedy.
Amusing and well presented.
haha
An interesting confessional. I applaud the sincerity of the sentiment. Charlie from busted is a very good looking person and I don't think a small smattering of back fat should interfere with both a succesful pop career and a healthy active life. Should the back fat subsume the front of you as well, enveloping what little visible frame you have remaining ala Rick Walla then I think you should write another poem concerning your general surfeit of blubber however at this time I believe the sentiment expressed here is both fitting and enough.
A splendid and promising beginning, sir.
This is fucking awful. And I hate busted. Especially the tall one. They should be put in a maximum security prison where they will be forced to sleep with the light on every night of their lives.
I apologise if that came out a bit strong. I've been having a bad morning.
I have been told that I bear an uncanny resemblance to Charlie from Busted and may I state unequivocally that you are a cunt.
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