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Pushed Too Far (Free verse) by DeadtotheWorld Left alone till my death
Drowning In water As I
Hold My breath
Wanting to see,
When I open my eyes
I was slithering for a great surprise
Nothing Inside me could realize
I was the ultimate sacrifice
lieing their on the bottom floor
someone saved me as they opened the door
Up the ladder:
Skin Milk
Down the ladder:
My Back Fat
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Posted: May 7, 2003 8:12 PM PDT; Last modified: May 7, 2003 8:12 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.9663825 Overall Rank: 8512 Comments:
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<{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154
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7-May-03/8:21 PM
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Did the door hit your head when it opened? lying there on that double negative?
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