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Pushed Too Far (Free verse) by DeadtotheWorld

Left alone till my death Drowning In water As I Hold My breath Wanting to see, When I open my eyes I was slithering for a great surprise Nothing Inside me could realize I was the ultimate sacrifice lieing their on the bottom floor someone saved me as they opened the door

<{Baba^Yaga}> 7-May-03/8:21 PM
Did the door hit your head when it opened? lying there on that double negative?




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