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My Back Fat (Free verse) by charlie busted

I am in love, though its friends that I lack, with 100 kilos of fat, hanging around my back. I used to be ashamed, I was always straight laced, now I just buy trousers, with a higher waist. Some think that Im a freak, Children point and they laugh, but they can't see my real shame when I give myself an accidental golden bath.

Stephen Robins 27-Jun-03/1:29 AM
An interesting confessional. I applaud the sincerity of the sentiment. Charlie from busted is a very good looking person and I don't think a small smattering of back fat should interfere with both a succesful pop career and a healthy active life. Should the back fat subsume the front of you as well, enveloping what little visible frame you have remaining ala Rick Walla then I think you should write another poem concerning your general surfeit of blubber however at this time I believe the sentiment expressed here is both fitting and enough.




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