| Re: Zealots on Ziggurots in Zion by Bachus |
1-Jul-03/6:12 PM |
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lovely, it gives me arousal to high degrees and delves into my divine orgasmic senses... ahhhhh.
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| Re: I'll be your Gimp by GAY AS FU*K |
1-Jul-03/6:31 PM |
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amusing, actually its funny, taking many risks, good shock value to piss off the modest, but i have to say its projected image is repulsive.. indecisive i am, so i wont vote, but just leave you with my comment.
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1-Jul-03/6:38 PM |
I am embraced with joy with this poem. surrealistic imagery to the max. but the walking bit along with the road part were slightly vague and confusing, along with the conclusion.
blessed with 7
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| Re: Zealots on Ziggurots in Zion by Bachus |
1-Jul-03/8:35 PM |
No, im not Jewish some might think me Amish, since i dont have a taste for expensive furniture, but my money is well spent in my fireplace of appitites.
What particularly arouses me is the dragon eating all of religion and elitist creeds. Think of the possibilites that can result if that were to happen! :D
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| Re: Mirage by Wulf |
1-Jul-03/8:48 PM |
Ok, your long introduction was... long.. i skipped it after reading maybe 25% of it. It was also vague and looked like senseless babble.
But your ending was interesting and well written, but lacks a creative presentation and form. It does have a very nice mind tickling point that makes me wonder what exactly are you saying. I'll save my vote in hopes of seeing you rewrite this.
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1-Jul-03/8:52 PM |
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Hmmm. ;) nice humoristic prod. I got an idea now.. i think your going to enjoy it with much laughter. blessed with seven.
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| Re: Killbirds by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
1-Jul-03/9:43 PM |
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interesting. i like it. ;D blessed with 9.
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| Re: Teen Hardcore by Johnnie Baptiste |
2-Jul-03/6:16 AM |
The joke isn't funny, or amusing. Your above comment saying "just kidding" seems to me to suggest that your poem was just a silly stab of humor... Due to the long amount of time you did take to respond with this, I think your attempting to save your ass from the cannon fire from the poets that the -joke- did injustice to.. alot of poets were poetically steped on by your poem.
And now you pathetically claim to be merely kidding? I don't buy it shithead. I'm unable to accept this explaination.
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2-Jul-03/8:52 AM |
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Final transmition? are you planning to leave ranker ville? thats.. disappointing.. are you having a nervous break down? looks like it, or an amusing childish fit of rage.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
2-Jul-03/9:20 AM |
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2-Jul-03/9:23 AM |
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Well, im sorry if i seem boring in bed, its because you dont give me any arousal what so ever.. also, i dont have a taste for men, i enjoy women... so you can call me a lesbian along with your remarks claiming me to be a girl. ;)
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2-Jul-03/10:35 AM |
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Sure, why not. Just do me one little favor. tell me what you think of my piece: Caesar and the giant?? i dont care if you insult it, stamp a zero on it or whatever you might be inspired to do, just give me a thought concerning my latest work.
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| Re: Fireworks & Family Reunions (Randel's cry for love) by Shardik |
5-Jul-03/12:12 AM |
lmao. ;) hey, hows the rgallet shitstorm going, a day passes and hes already a wanker. wonderfull poem, blessed with nine.
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| Re: Dogma (Free herts) by Moose Farte by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
5-Jul-03/12:16 AM |
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| Re: the photobooth by Bill Z Bub |
5-Jul-03/12:25 AM |
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**THIS POEM TEMPORARILY OUT OF SERVICE**... damnit... damn tease.
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| Re: SHAME AND THE OLD MANS CANDLE by Garrett S Sexton |
5-Jul-03/1:41 AM |
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hrmm. interesting. blessed with 7
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| Re: 195.157.153.253 by <~> |
6-Jul-03/8:14 AM |
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lol.. yeah. still have wierd thoughts that i am settle? i hope not after looking at the ips, because then id start to feel like alice in wonderland, where i dont know who i am or where i am. nice poem, heres a 10.
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| Re: Hi, my name is "Look at me, Stop it!" I'm Bi-polar by horus8 |
6-Jul-03/8:33 AM |
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Yep, I love this poem.. muse did some strange whine on my poetic soup comments section about not wanting to vote because of his/hers work being mutilated.. and when i saw this, i laughed my ass off in joy.. blessed with a 10, good fucking job!!!
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| Re: Rude Awakenings by OneFingerAnswer |
6-Jul-03/8:39 AM |
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Damn good. Very descriptive and well worded. blessed with 10.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
6-Jul-03/8:40 AM |
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Man... are you going to make songs that dont sound like the same shit ive heard a million times?
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