regarding some deleted poem...	6-Jul-03/8:44 AM
Hey hey, not bad at all. ;) Gave me a smile. Blessed with 9.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Jul-03/8:50 AM
Being shocking and poking fun is something i enjoy seeing, but you have to see when your doing more than being shocking or humoristic. Its good to be able to tell if you have crossed the line or not. Good work btw, blessed with 8.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Jul-03/8:53 AM
... Your a media critic now? lol. heres an 8.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Jul-03/8:59 AM
Well.. im not being mean, remember this, im rating on quality: 4. Heres a few tips: Dont _ the cursing, its just not needed. Be more descriptive about how he is an asshole instead of saying "your an asshole" You played me like a trick - not descriptive enough in this case. Btw, forcing rhyme by using other words that do not fit well in the line isn't a good idea. Also, try to use an more expanded vocabulary.. it helps. www.webster.com is a very effective tool for this. Good luck with your poetry.
Re: lucid building peace by nolan	6-Jul-03/9:03 AM
Over all i enjoyed the poem, but i think the piece before ...death is confusing to a point.. or thats my opinion anyway. heres a 7.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Jul-03/9:06 AM
Written nicely.. but its really not original.. the same cliches are here that i find in almost 70% of love poems.. heres a 5.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Jul-03/9:07 AM
Again, unoriginal. 5.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Jul-03/9:09 AM
The ending is alot better than your original, good work. 10 ;)
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Jul-03/9:13 AM
lol. ;D This one really tickles my funny bone, its something im sure to remember forever. Blessed with 9.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Jul-03/4:50 PM
Im julia and the ogre? hrmmm. now i need to go read the tekken story to understand exactly what your saying lol. hehehe. nice poem, very creative imagination you got there. heres a 10.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Jul-03/5:51 PM
At the age of 15, Jin found out that he was Kazuya Mishima' son. At the same time, he lost his mother, Jun Kazama. Jin trained himself under the supervision of Heihachi with the intention of defeating the "God of Fight", who is supposed to have killed his mother. Heihachi was not only his grandfather, but a reliable teacher. ------- this implies that your planning to kill me lol. heres a glimpse into the future: empty victory. Man, simply combining the tekken 3 story and the people of poem ranker makes a ranker story that is very entertaining and enlightens me to certain aspects. heh. whether real or imagined, its still amusing.
Re: To be titled by Horus8(Craft's Service) by thepinkbunnyofdoom	7-Jul-03/7:09 PM
Hrmm.. i remninds me of the table of contents of a magazine.. hrmm.. can i be allowed to ponder a title for this one too? good work btw. blessed with 10
Re: Priceless Moment by thepinkbunnyofdoom	7-Jul-03/7:13 PM
Haiku.. ah, i never really had much practice, actually no practice is more like it, with haikus.. but yeah, abandon the haiku idea or remake this.. could be a damn good start for a better poem though. i wont vote on this for the moment.
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Jul-03/7:19 PM
i like the creative way you presented the poem, buts it seems like its written by a naive lover boy... really.. which is why i dont like it. It doesnt delve into any brilliant expressions of emotion or thoughts on love, just to name a few things of its pitfalls. I cant explain more descriptively why i dont like it, its just that it gives me an unpleasant feeling.. heres a six.
Re: My Ass Bag by King Abdullah I	7-Jul-03/7:23 PM
OK let me inform everyone: I DID NOT WRITE THIS CRAP. TWO: Im going to ask that this username be DELETED. Im not going to have some imposter attempting to make me look like an idiot. Also, settle, i think your the one responsible for this, and its not smart to piss me off. If im wrong about my assumptions, forgive me. btw, heres a zero.
Re: Crowning Achievement by MrsGretchen	7-Jul-03/7:49 PM
I really like this poem alot. It is written well, but theres lots of room for improvement. blessed with 8.
Re: oh god please help me by crwncka1	7-Jul-03/7:55 PM
"It is only my refection" reflection "but their simply appears to be," their should be There Nice poem, though its a little confusing, you need to be more descriptive. You have alot to work on, but you have potential. Blessed with 6
Re: the godself within by crwncka1	7-Jul-03/7:58 PM
the title and the poem have nothing to do with each other. you failed miserably to make a poem about the godself within. blessed with 3
Re: blackhole by crwncka1	7-Jul-03/8:01 PM
Yeah.. i dont intent to be mean or insulting.. but bachus is right... your recent pieces are.. crappy. The ideas are good, just the way you presented them suck.
Re: the power that be by crwncka1	7-Jul-03/8:05 PM
dood.. you need to realize that you dont have a fucking inkling of understanding concerning the subject.. plus your limping poetically with how your attempting to poetically write about it.