Re: Experimental Robot Questionaire by horus8	27-Oct-03/4:28 PM
Hrmm.. the matrix research project? PK's AI would require a bottle of rum, three joints, the mobile meth stash, a copy of this piece, since its fucking funny- the conversation will definately require spicing of this sort. 10!
Re: comment-ary by nentwined	27-Oct-03/4:30 PM
well shit, i think im getting to really like these haikus, nice work. 9
Re: Teaching Beetles To Swim by Bobjim	27-Oct-03/4:37 PM
Frankly, i hate insects.. for no reason either, but i respect some, untill they get near me and drive me to conduct a murder of bugs. I should do some self therapy perhaps, and find out why they bother me.. maybe one crawled near my diaper as a kid, or whatever. ok, onto the subject at hand: This needs to be edited a bit.. looks rough to me. 6 for now, toodles.
Re: The Santa Anna's fire and red sun by Bachus	29-Oct-03/5:08 PM
awesome, quite enjoyable.
Re: A Truth About Mortals by Caducus	6-Nov-03/7:44 AM
Well- it bored me, and if this was written to convey that things are not what they seem, you could of written perhaps 4 lines at the most and spared readers from being seriously mislead. -shrug-
Re: At least while you're gone, things get done. by Bachus	6-Nov-03/9:56 AM
Nice lil tweak with monday, you always manage some method of keeping the form intact when you start to slide a bit off course. Damned good vil. 9
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Nov-03/9:59 AM
The best one I have seen from you, well done. Blessed with 10.
Re: I AM THE BEST by ____________________	6-Nov-03/11:35 AM
settle...? that or someone that has studied his works extensively.
Re: I don't like fish by INTRANSIT	6-Nov-03/1:08 PM
Bad sushi.. did you ask yourself if you had gills first? could have been a good idea. Heres an eight.
Re: Pot Haikus (Ode to Stoners) by Shardik	6-Nov-03/1:43 PM
that sparks alot of memories.. first one is the best. Stoner 9 award.
Re: It was... by Shardik	6-Nov-03/1:45 PM
.. i wonder who would eat a potato that was used as a dildo.. -shiver- poor lad.
Re: Memory by SILYLILGURL	6-Nov-03/2:43 PM
... im guessing that you had no inspiration for your writing today? Might look nice in your journal though. blessed with 0.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Nov-03/3:34 PM
You know, my dad told me that one can have a job like the rest of the good citizens and still retain ones individuality. Not being mean, but I really think the titles you come up with really need more creative influence.. but thats me, and heres a 5.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Nov-03/3:39 PM
I suggest calling this: Suburbanite Anthem. Heres a 7, and exactly why do you have to go heavy on the depressed drama element? Its cramping your work, but again my opinions are just my own view.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Nov-03/3:40 PM
Seems that you've decided to stick to a pattern here.. obsessing are we?
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Nov-03/3:42 PM
End of the road, and mid-age crisis in full bloom.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Nov-03/8:11 PM
forget the shovel- use dynamite, save digging for the customer. Could be tweaked here and there, overall i bless you with a seven.
Re: Marrowless highway by INTRANSIT	6-Nov-03/8:18 PM
Blessed with eight, go in peace.
Re: Sorry by tori	6-Nov-03/8:21 PM
oi.. my evil powers are really suffering today, and now i feel an urge to add to the dad poems. I'll survive though, and heres a seven.
Re: Awefucked by a Shushin Shitzu (freefuck) by <{Baba^Yaga}>	7-Nov-03/10:29 PM
Fuckling- neato. Overall: very bacchanal. Blessed with 8.