regarding some deleted poem...	7-Nov-03/10:51 PM
...looks like you went heavy on the padding.
Re: Got Spilk? By a concerned white Christian 'man'. by Bachus	7-Nov-03/10:59 PM
Bravo! The poolpike has been born! Blessed with 9.
Re: I Found a Box... by leviathan	7-Nov-03/11:04 PM
"If these cardboard walls could speak" Blessed with 9.
Re: 7 Days of Suicide by dragonfly	7-Nov-03/11:17 PM
i think of ways to commit murder and make it look like a freak accident. everyones different ofcourse, heres a seven.
Re: The lasts of Joe by Freethinker1602	8-Nov-03/4:26 PM
Hide? Grow nut hair and give her a kiss already. Blessed with 4.
Re: Givin' in by Freethinker1602	8-Nov-03/4:32 PM
I said that once, but then I got a nine inch nail in me bumcheeck and quickly got up. Last Days become another Beginning, and fate was written with a pencil- get yourself JesusCream - White Out Made To Erase Sin!! (Gods Pen belongs to me, sorry-I stole that and his Buddha Joint) heres a 6.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Nov-03/4:36 PM
Can I cut the work by 90% and use my DreamBlender with turbo-frappe? Blessed with seven.
regarding some deleted poem...	8-Nov-03/4:39 PM
Cold streets can boil when they feel freshly spilled blood. Blessed with 8.
Re: an early discovery (reworking) by richa	8-Nov-03/4:42 PM
Pity the trees that stoop- 10.
Re: Greybie Blue by abecedarian	8-Nov-03/4:45 PM
polyamorist isnt in my dictionary.. exactly what does it mean? Aside from that, I bless you with 7.
Re: Sandpaper reminds me of your ashes by SupremeDreamer	8-Nov-03/6:47 PM
I just couldnt resist.. plus today I didn't feel like making a sonnet- I've become addicted to the vilanelle.
Re: take me home by New Life Drug	8-Nov-03/11:09 PM
You know what that means? Gills are next on your "need to get" list. Blessed with seven- btw, you mix well with my meth injection.
Re: Love (pyramus and thisbe) by New Life Drug	8-Nov-03/11:11 PM
Blessed with 6.
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Nov-03/2:23 AM
dusting up the old works, its amazing how poems look after you write them- and how different they become with age. whats also amazing? how many mistakes you see when looking back at them.
Re: Something I Hope I Would Not Hear Myself Speak by Lifeboatman	14-Nov-03/2:30 AM
long time, no see- ive missed your works, and enjoyed this one- even though its pencrap to you. bust seats- slightly confusing, but i understand what you mean, i hope: empty seats? (bust- adj, lacking funds?) well anyway, heres an 8.
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Nov-03/2:37 AM
Aye.. the title: cliche language used: teenage aching heart with added cliche drama. and worst of all: you used bittersweet? i did that too once, and then smashed my face into a wall. then you repeated it. If your going to do mush, then atleast make it good- or close to it.. this poem would be great as a pimple. heres a 4.
Re: Those weeks I slit my wrists to the Smiths by Jeremi B. Handrinos	14-Nov-03/2:41 AM
well, not too bad, not the best you could have done though. Blessed with 8.
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Nov-03/2:53 AM
longed long- this disrupts the flow a bit, to me anyway. its fingers- also nuked my reading flow, was sudden and i lost track of what you were saying. overall? i like it, hope to see revisions though. blessed with 8.
Re: paint me a poem (try 2) by nentwined	14-Nov-03/3:06 AM
I love it. really, i do. 10.
Re: Outhouse by newagepoet2000	14-Nov-03/10:53 AM
675? Close enough I guess. blessed with 4. Oh, and not to be rude.. but your nick makes mine seem smashin, really- I can't keep from giggling everytime I read "new age poet" since the first thought that pops up in my head is: "whats that? virgin hippies meet MDMA+pantheism?" No offense intended, just being liberal with my opinion.