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comment-ary (Haiku) by nentwined holier than thou
commenting on your comments
distancing from fear
Up the ladder:
sitting at the cliff's edge
Down the ladder:
Jingoism saved the wingnut
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Posted: October 27, 2003 9:03 AM PST; Last modified: October 27, 2003 9:03 AM PSTWeighted score: 6.998178 Overall Rank: 90 Comments:
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http://mulberryfairy @ 209.222.212.42
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27-Oct-03/11:14 AM
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righteous
well shit, i think im getting to really like these haikus, nice work. 9
I like your haiku/senryu, you do a very nice job of conveying a single, not necessarily simple, thought in them.
People think that's easy. Spewing the first thing that comes into your head and bleeding bile and blood all over a page - THATS easy. Sorry, I was spewing. Done now.
thank you very much. :)
could be about poemranker
could be. but one never knows. I'd like to think the poem is more general than that, but certainly encapsulates the ranker. a human tendency, more.
well said (both your comment-ary and commentary)
Satan fears nothing but my Ice scream.
hmmm...would like to peer in and see the rest...be a fly on the wall of your mind, go around the corner and watch from the shadows. And I am not usually much of a voyuer...voyeur...voyeuor...*shoot! (However you spell it!)..or am I? Are we all? Here peering into the minds, souls, and thoughts, that are annonomously (?!SP!) bared to the public for view...
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