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by nentwined

Member since 2001 · Posted 27 Oct 2003 · 9 comments

holier than thou commenting on your comments distancing from fear

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9 comments

[9] http://mulberryfairy 27-Oct-03/11:14 AM Reply

righteous

[9] SupremeDreamer 27-Oct-03/4:30 PM Reply

well shit, i think im getting to really like these haikus, nice work. 9

[8] Shuushin 27-Oct-03/6:58 PM Reply

I like your haiku/senryu, you do a very nice job of conveying a single, not necessarily simple, thought in them.

People think that's easy. Spewing the first thing that comes into your head and bleeding bile and blood all over a page - THATS easy.

Sorry, I was spewing. Done now.

[n/a] nentwined › Shuushin 28-Oct-03/8:12 AM Reply

thank you very much. :)

[8] richa 28-Oct-03/7:23 AM Reply

could be about poemranker

[n/a] nentwined › richa 28-Oct-03/8:11 AM Reply

could be. but one never knows. I'd like to think the poem is more general than that, but certainly encapsulates the ranker. a human tendency, more.

[n/a] abecedarian › nentwined 28-Oct-03/8:58 AM Reply

well said (both your comment-ary and commentary)

[0] Shardik 28-Oct-03/10:23 PM Reply

Satan fears nothing but my Ice scream.

[7] LilMsLadyPoet 11-Jul-05/9:07 AM Reply

hmmm...would like to peer in and see the rest...be a fly on the wall of your mind, go around the corner and watch from the shadows. And I am not usually much of a voyuer...voyeur...voyeuor...*shoot! (However you spell it!)..or am I? Are we all? Here peering into the minds, souls, and thoughts, that are annonomously (?!SP!) bared to the public for view...