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Re: a comment on A Second by Luzr 29-Mar-05/11:21 PM
Thank you kindly.
Re: Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams 1-Feb-05/1:07 AM
Incredibly. Both the retort and the words of this poem.
Re: Ode to Brittanyy and her Dyke Jacket. by DreamerSupreme 1-Feb-05/1:02 AM
mighty slam indeed. one would have to bless your words.

<3 Jason

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Re: a comment on Psalm of Wonder by Dovina 1-Feb-05/12:50 AM
All the more reason for it to work. Minus emotion, you get thought, and thought more often than not, Invokes emotion.

<3 Jason
Re: Disable by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 1-Feb-05/12:45 AM
Loved it. I made one just for you.

<3 Jason
Re: a comment on James The Dashing Pirate by thepinkbunnyofdoom 1-Feb-05/12:39 AM
Nah, You'd have to know James to understand.

<3 Jason
Re: a comment on Twilight Affair by thepinkbunnyofdoom 1-Apr-04/9:28 AM
Actually I recently quit smoking. Cigarette Burns was more for the affect here than anything else.
Re: a comment on Leaves, hope and dreams by aliena 1-Apr-04/9:18 AM
LOL, too true.
Re: a comment on Shampoo and Condition by Luzr 1-Apr-04/9:15 AM
A. Fictional, for the most part. B. Thats the point. Meaningless Day to Day. Notice some items in the first 2 lines to make that better? Apparently not. There is more here than you see. The question being whose the baby? The meaning isn't in the actions. Its in the tone and title. Look beyond the surface.
Re: Leaves, hope and dreams by aliena 1-Apr-04/9:01 AM
Whose doing the mourning? No vote for now
Re: a comment on Shampoo and Condition by Luzr 1-Apr-04/8:59 AM
Okay, What you wondering
Re: Municipal park by richa 1-Apr-04/8:58 AM
'have' should be 'has'. Other than that its true. -8-
Re: Las Gaviotas by Bachus 1-Apr-04/8:56 AM
Damn. Now that's Verse!
Re: Fresh faced Danger-Teen by INTRANSIT 8-Aug-03/5:18 PM
lol. I am a fresh faced danger-teen. -9- Very playful, Very witty.
Re: TBPOD Speaks by King Abdullah II 10-Jul-03/11:43 AM
Oh my mother fucking god, I love you. I have missed you so. You truely are living up to your potential. I was wondering when someone would think to use my xanga against me. -10-
Re: a comment on TPBOD Joins a pack of wolves by Luzr 10-Jul-03/11:39 AM
well duh. You should know that better than anyone.
Re: smile by nolan 10-Jul-03/10:10 AM
DreamerSupreme Style. -8-
Its good but does touch on the cliche, side.
Re: a comment on TPBOD Joins a pack of wolves by Luzr 10-Jul-03/10:06 AM
So tell me what you really think of my little skit.
Re: a comment on TPBOD Joins a pack of wolves by Luzr 10-Jul-03/10:05 AM
Yep. I knew since about the first time you posted a few poems, But I think, I'll wait til the others figure it out, My Lord. You had no clue it was me as SimpleDimple? Good that proves something I've wondered for a while. Whether or not I could write differently, if I used another name or if it'd be discovered that I was SimpleDimple and thepinkbunnyofdoom.
Re: all american machine by nolan 10-Jul-03/9:58 AM
Some one has been reading Howard Zinn or Listening to alot of NOFX. Nice Rant. I'm wondering though, Did you mean "give me nightmeres" or "give me nightmares"


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