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Municipal park (Free verse) by richa
The council have planted five more of those japanese maple trees in a garden that is not ours. It is a shame that our small hamlet must come from different directions to agree, the money was wasted. That the garden is not ours.

Up the ladder: Fishing Pole
Down the ladder: On the Brink of Normality

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.222222
Weighted score: 6.611111
Overall Rank: 590
Posted: April 1, 2004 6:37 AM PST; Last modified: April 1, 2004 8:02 AM PST
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[8] Luzr @ 66.213.67.10 | 1-Apr-04/8:58 AM | Reply
'have' should be 'has'. Other than that its true. -8-
[n/a] richa @ 81.178.243.245 > Luzr | 1-Apr-04/9:13 AM | Reply
what is true?
[10] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.52 | 1-Apr-04/3:35 PM | Reply
Hmmm. Strong methinks - strong.

and "have" should be "have" - you knew that, right?
[9] aliena @ 210.214.123.74 | 1-Apr-04/11:56 PM | Reply
what is the fibal verdict? has or have?
[9] aliena @ 210.214.123.74 > aliena | 1-Apr-04/11:56 PM | Reply
What is the final verdict? has or have?
[7] horus8 @ 66.229.187.185 | 29-Apr-04/3:20 PM | Reply
Are all of your poems about paralyzed acorns?
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