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Municipal park (Free verse) by richa The council have planted five more of
those japanese maple trees
in a garden that is not ours.
It is a shame that our small hamlet must
come from different directions to agree,
the money was wasted.
That the garden is not ours.
Up the ladder:
Butterfly Plague
Down the ladder:
Mermaid
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Posted: April 1, 2004 6:37 AM PST; Last modified: April 1, 2004 8:02 AM PSTWeighted score: 6.611111 Overall Rank: 594 Comments:
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Luzr @ 66.213.67.10
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1-Apr-04/8:58 AM
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'have' should be 'has'. Other than that its true. -8-
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richa @ 81.178.243.245
> Luzr
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1-Apr-04/9:13 AM
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what is true?
Hmmm. Strong methinks - strong.
and "have" should be "have" - you knew that, right?
what is the fibal verdict? has or have?
What is the final verdict? has or have?
Are all of your poems about paralyzed acorns?
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