Re: School girls lovely school girls by ==Doylum	5-Aug-02/6:50 PM
Yes i take your critiques on board, however i still feel we need to take vis-a-vis the forecoming masterpiece, whoes title i have yet to finalise. CHrist I fucking love you. Opps sorry for the outburst
Re: Love Obsession (the stalker's song) by evergreen	5-Aug-02/6:34 PM
with the wrong chords and melody this would make a really bad song. Whoreus8 stating the bleedin obvious. What sort of music do you like whoreus? - gee i like good music. Evergreen - super little poem thingy, but not as good as the other one about a total slag waking up next to someone they don't even remember..... It wasn't a personal experience was it oh shit i may have offended again
Re: Johnny Nasty by peotaster	5-Aug-02/4:55 PM
I feel another excrement achivement award coming on however it is not to be laid at the door of peotater but at you newhowl, for pompous bleating from the pulpit, you student nazi. You have not even written poetry yet how could you know of its demands. Let me see you work if its not in by tomorrow detention shall ensue
Re: For Benjamin by moonUnit	4-Aug-02/2:53 PM
Amythest you've never written anything and you welcome people to the site, bloody hell. Quite like you poem don't go of the rails and start getting poncy like many people here.
Re: Grief by ifni	4-Aug-02/2:48 PM
almost good
Re: you scare me like the rollercoaster by silvertongueddevil	4-Aug-02/2:46 PM
oh whoow. I think i shall abandon my love for Handsom Pete and lick the horn-ed head of the silver cunning linguist.
Re: Give me a goal by nentwined	4-Aug-02/2:41 PM
find yer own bloody goal ye lazy toerag. Expecting us lot to come up with one for you, as if its not enough that we slave night and day writting crap to fill your site up with, you want more. Are not my Wordes enough. If anyone does find one for you can i have one to
Re: The Set Back by horus8	4-Aug-02/2:36 PM
why do i keep being presented with an poem entitled The Set Back. Where ever i turn i am asked to vote: please vote upon these words. Scart line in line line out 50Hz 240V 50W Achtung! entfernen Sie nicht Abdeckung
Re: i would have you by silvertongueddevil	4-Aug-02/2:26 PM
not as naughty as some of you others, make them more dirty i like that.
Re: Freeform (No votes yet) 0 comments by abecedarian	4-Aug-02/1:30 PM
You want comment boy, comment, and yet when you recive the sage words of (i think you will like the new addition to my name suggested by Handsome Pete) Bodh'sattva Doylum you delete them. W-hell you insufferable young pup i've a good mind to lash you till your whinnets fall of for yer impudence. However i shall leave you be for the time being please see that it does not happen again. You have been warned, mother is oiling the flail.
Re: Freeform (No votes yet) 0 comments by abecedarian	4-Aug-02/1:30 PM
You want comment boy, comment, and yet when you recive the sage words of (i think you will like the new addition to my name suggested by Handsome Pete) Bodh'sattva Doylum you delete them. W-hell you insufferable young pup i've a good mind to lash you till your whinnets fall of for yer impudence. However i shall leave you be for the time being please see that it does not happen again. You have been warned, mother is oiling the flail.
Re: HOW DO I WRITE by kawakurdi	3-Aug-02/6:18 PM
Bloody a-mericans telling us how to use our own language, they'll be dictating of foreign policy next, and what we watch and hear.. .. oh hang on, oh Like the poem though. P.S Bushy Boy. Get yer hands of Filingdales i know what your up to and i don't much like it i can tell you, i may even write a really rather strong letter to the local newspaper about it. Nah shit can be bothered.
Re: Bottom on the heath by ==Doylum	3-Aug-02/5:34 PM
thank you for the beginings of your magnum opus, i dare say that if you strive had enough you may manage to haul it up to a level just below mediocrity. I suggest you look at he works of forestchild7 for inspiration. Do keep trying i shall look forward to your next instalment.
Re: Horatio by april fool	3-Aug-02/4:58 PM
Don't let them hurt Horatio, he must be nurtured like a tiny seed, he must be protected from the forces that would harm him, the fags must not get a hold upon this most virginal of boys, he must not be forced to play the biscuit game, or play the dormitory panpipes of love. Save him april save him
Re: The Gravity of Love by april fool	3-Aug-02/4:21 PM
Oh pete pete pete pete pete, your turning me on again stop it. This poem is a smashing poem and though it pains me to say so Handsome Pete i find it far superior to other drivel I have found on this site, would you not agree. For of the same please april dear
Re: Innsmouth by razorgrin	3-Aug-02/4:13 PM
The title suggested to me an poem of erotic beauty betwixt a lowly yorkshire stable lad and the country squire, you disappoint me, not at every turn, but certainly at this one.
Re: The One I think About by ThoughtfulSoul	3-Aug-02/4:05 PM
He takes no heed mother. He continues regardless, mother help me save him
Re: Existence by ThoughtfulSoul	3-Aug-02/4:00 PM
Mother the boy keeps erasing my comments. Mother what shall I do. Mother help me to be strong.
Re: I Hate You by mytenderrage	3-Aug-02/3:36 PM
I have returned from the brewhouse. Who requires my hwords nay pearls of wisdome.
Re: Hey! by Cha no Onna	1-Aug-02/5:47 PM
Master of the cat shit chapter