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The Gravity of Love (Free verse) by april fool You can't fall in love due to gravity
Though it feels like you're hit on the head
When your thoughts turn to lust and depravity
When they should be on marriage instead
For love is a serious matter
Know the difference between love and lust
Go for the former not latter
And happiness is achievable - just!
Up the ladder:
Memories
Down the ladder:
Reality
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Posted: July 29, 2002 11:01 AM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2002 11:01 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.7310586 Overall Rank: 11798 Comments:
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pete @ 194.222.69.43
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29-Jul-02/11:50 AM
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.. somewhat prudish methinks , and the one without the other would make for a cold marriage
Oh pete pete pete pete pete, your turning me on again stop it.
This poem is a smashing poem and though it pains me to say so Handsome Pete i find it far superior to other drivel I have found on this site, would you not agree. For of the same please april dear
let us know when you do
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