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The Gravity of Love (Free verse) by april fool

You can't fall in love due to gravity Though it feels like you're hit on the head When your thoughts turn to lust and depravity When they should be on marriage instead For love is a serious matter Know the difference between love and lust Go for the former not latter And happiness is achievable - just!

==Doylum 3-Aug-02/4:21 PM
Oh pete pete pete pete pete, your turning me on again stop it.
This poem is a smashing poem and though it pains me to say so Handsome Pete i find it far superior to other drivel I have found on this site, would you not agree. For of the same please april dear




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