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i would have you (Free verse) by silvertongueddevil
i would have you
in the heavy felt
of an overcoat
the wet heat has you
in thin blue with bare arms
and bare legs
languishing on the sofa
while i hang limply
across an armchair
we speak slowly, comfortably
about people and events
under your words
through your shirt
i recall you bathed
standing in thick steam,
modest whisps dispersing
how does an image drown
the sound of your voice?
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.220199
Overall Rank: 4332
Posted: May 11, 2002 3:17 AM PDT; Last modified: May 11, 2002 3:17 AM PDT
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