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i would have you (Free verse) by silvertongueddevil

i would have you in the heavy felt of an overcoat the wet heat has you in thin blue with bare arms and bare legs languishing on the sofa while i hang limply across an armchair we speak slowly, comfortably about people and events under your words through your shirt i recall you bathed standing in thick steam, modest whisps dispersing how does an image drown the sound of your voice?

==Doylum 4-Aug-02/2:26 PM
not as naughty as some of you others, make them more dirty i like that.




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