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The One I think About (Free verse) by ThoughtfulSoul She is in every thought
Her smiles blind my mind
Her beauty makes things possible
But alas the one I think about
Is always out of my reach
I stretch myself as far as possible
but it seems her whispers still escape me
Then I think it must be destined because being with
her would make me happy beyond existence
Up the ladder:
In my weakest hour, I find my true strength
Down the ladder:
Winged Beauty
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Posted: August 1, 2002 4:54 PM PDT; Last modified: August 1, 2002 4:54 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.03842 Overall Rank: 7179 Comments:
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==Doylum @ 213.122.127.18
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3-Aug-02/4:05 PM
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He takes no heed mother. He continues regardless, mother help me save him
i only wonder if mother knows something is really wrong with her backwards child
Some people jerk off, some write poems about the girlie they adore. I'd rather you were in the first category.
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