The One I think About

Member since 2002 · Posted 1 Aug 2002 · 3 comments

She is in every thought Her smiles blind my mind Her beauty makes things possible But alas the one I think about Is always out of my reach I stretch myself as far as possible but it seems her whispers still escape me Then I think it must be destined because being with her would make me happy beyond existence

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[10] ==Doylum 3-Aug-02/4:05 PM Reply

He takes no heed mother. He continues regardless, mother help me save him

[n/a] ThoughtfulSoul 4-Aug-02/4:20 PM Reply

i only wonder if mother knows something is really wrong with her backwards child

[n/a] razorgrin 7-Aug-02/4:27 PM Reply

Some people jerk off, some write poems about the girlie they adore. I'd rather you were in the first category.