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Grief (Free verse) by ifni
tears are sneaking up on me, that hidden grief rumbling underneath. tears are sneaking up on me, bright betrayers gentle swayers revealing my hidden face. tears are sneaking up on me, I can't hide my fear, now. I can't hide my horror, now. Now, turn your face away. 9-17-01 JV
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.375
Weighted score: 4.449502
Overall Rank: 12893
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:15 AM PST; Last modified: April 24, 2002 3:56 PM PDT
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[10] nentwined @ | 9-May-02/5:21 PM | Reply
Ooh, good one! =)
[7] ==Doylum @ 213.122.185.250 | 4-Aug-02/2:48 PM | Reply
almost good
[1] poetandknowit @ 65.101.211.63 | 5-Sep-02/6:31 PM | Reply
The redundancy sure does not sneak up on you. I am sure there are much better ways to approach such a broad subject as grief.
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