Free verse № 1963

Hey!

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 May 2002 · 4 comments

Hey! Who shit in my sandbox! Who was it who clawed in here and Left their feces laying around? Ain't publicity grand? Well, I suppose it'll all even out in the end When squabbling young pigeons Cloacas full of brown splatter Fly somewhere else to shit. Fly away, little birds. Fly away. Fly fly.

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[7] nentwined 27-Jun-02/2:48 PM Reply

Hey, I like this. =)

[n/a] Cha no Onna › nentwined 8-Oct-02/5:22 PM Reply

Yeah ... I think the people who said it sucked were some of the aforementioned pigeons ... it's more commentary than poetry.

[10] ==Doylum 1-Aug-02/5:47 PM Reply

Master of the cat shit chapter

[n/a] PunkyPanda 9-Jan-04/10:14 AM Reply

::applauds:: By far the most creative...10! Lol.