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Hey! (Free verse) by Cha no Onna Hey!
Who shit in my sandbox!
Who was it who clawed in here and
Left their feces laying around?
Ain't publicity grand?
Well, I suppose it'll all even out in the end
When squabbling young pigeons
Cloacas full of brown splatter
Fly somewhere else to shit.
Fly away, little birds. Fly away. Fly fly.
Up the ladder:
frustration is the lamp i'm holding
Down the ladder:
I'm Not A Poet
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.5384617
Posted: May 14, 2002 3:13 PM PDT; Last modified: May 14, 2002 3:13 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.662588 Overall Rank: 12265 Comments:
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nentwined @ 66.92.183.34
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27-Jun-02/2:48 PM
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Hey, I like this. =)
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Cha no Onna @ 206.110.252.242
> nentwined
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8-Oct-02/5:22 PM
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Yeah ... I think the people who said it sucked were some of the aforementioned pigeons ... it's more commentary than poetry.
Master of the cat shit chapter
::applauds:: By far the most creative...10! Lol.
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