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Hey! (Free verse) by Cha no Onna

Hey! Who shit in my sandbox! Who was it who clawed in here and Left their feces laying around? Ain't publicity grand? Well, I suppose it'll all even out in the end When squabbling young pigeons Cloacas full of brown splatter Fly somewhere else to shit. Fly away, little birds. Fly away. Fly fly.

Cha no Onna 8-Oct-02/5:22 PM
Yeah ... I think the people who said it sucked were some of the aforementioned pigeons ... it's more commentary than poetry.




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