poemranker ::frustration is the lamp i'm holding by silvertongueddevil

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Free verse № 1489

frustration is the lamp i'm holding

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 May 2002 · 4 comments

frustration is the lamp i'm holding and with it my trained imagination, schooled in finding the beauty and truth that eludes the everyday people when faced with what the world asks of us in even the simple task of entering a room, sees a path we can follow. the world is great in this way - it has been made so that between every a and c there is a b. and in the language this poet thinks in, there is another letter hidden between a and b, and that letter, which i may not name, has a neighbour it shares with b. and on its other side, like every house on the street, another neighbour, shared with a. of course i leave them out when i write these words down, but their presence lingers on like garlic on your fingers after the chopping is done. and like these letters there are small acts, small movements, small changes that, similar to turning a square page into a bug or a swan, we can use to shape the world, our small part in the world, one fold at a time, until it favours us. so, do you have no faith in this, or do you want no faith in this and should i put down this lamp or dash it?

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4 comments

[2] anonymous 14-May-02/7:20 AM Reply
this is certainly worth polishing... you're on to something here. tighten it. Make it flow.
[2] anonymous 19-May-02/10:44 AM Reply
I like what you are pointing to here, but you aren't trusting the very thing itself, the interpolation that is why poetry. Because you say this I have some confidence you will get to trust, but not with this kind of thought in your mind:::

that eludes the everyday people
WHAT??? who and what DO you think you are talking about..
grow up some

and notice the between the between everywhere.
[5] nentwined 12-Jun-02/2:21 AM Reply
cute. :)
[9] <~> 31-Jul-02/9:24 AM Reply
lamplighter, bring me a lamp.
i like being turned around like that, and told a secret.