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Feelings (Free verse) by Fire_is_cool
How I long for you to hold me, Just for a minute, One minute before I die, Promise that you'll never let me go, That you'll hold me forever in your heart, Yet slowly I slip away, Only to be forgotten by everyone I know, To be replaced by a prettier face, GoodBye everyone.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.663823
Overall Rank: 12268
Posted: June 7, 2004 3:19 PM PDT; Last modified: June 7, 2004 3:19 PM PDT
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[n/a] Fire_is_cool @ 65.100.207.236 | 7-Jun-04/3:20 PM | Reply
I know it's lame but forgive me, I can't help it.
[8] Bill Z Bub @ 216.75.181.83 > Fire_is_cool | 7-Jun-04/11:57 PM | Reply
I forgive you.

To be honest, it moved me greatly.

On the other hand, I just read an issue of The Fantastic Four that moved me greatly.

[4] Chasz Misleading @ 68.225.250.222 | 7-Jun-04/10:35 PM | Reply
i'd have to agree
[1] Edna Sweetlove @ 81.178.70.5 | 13-Aug-06/5:56 PM | Reply
Goodbye is the happiest word.
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