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Feelings (Free verse) by Fire_is_cool How I long for you to hold me,
Just for a minute,
One minute before I die,
Promise that you'll never let me go,
That you'll hold me forever in your heart,
Yet slowly I slip away,
Only to be forgotten by everyone I know,
To be replaced by a prettier face,
GoodBye everyone.
Up the ladder:
Picasso: Death is a Mental Song
Down the ladder:
frustration is the lamp i'm holding
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Posted: June 7, 2004 3:19 PM PDT; Last modified: June 7, 2004 3:19 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.663823 Overall Rank: 12263 Comments:
i'd have to agree
Goodbye is the happiest word.
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To be honest, it moved me greatly.
On the other hand, I just read an issue of The Fantastic Four that moved me greatly.