Feelings

Member since 2004 · Posted 7 Jun 2004 · 4 comments

How I long for you to hold me, Just for a minute, One minute before I die, Promise that you'll never let me go, That you'll hold me forever in your heart, Yet slowly I slip away, Only to be forgotten by everyone I know, To be replaced by a prettier face, GoodBye everyone.

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[n/a] Fire_is_cool 7-Jun-04/3:20 PM Reply

I know it's lame but forgive me, I can't help it.

[8] Bill Z Bub › Fire_is_cool 7-Jun-04/11:57 PM Reply

I forgive you.

To be honest, it moved me greatly.

On the other hand, I just read an issue of The Fantastic Four that moved me greatly.

[4] Chasz Misleading 7-Jun-04/10:35 PM Reply

i'd have to agree

[1] Edna Sweetlove 13-Aug-06/5:56 PM Reply

Goodbye is the happiest word.