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Feelings (Free verse) by Fire_is_cool

How I long for you to hold me, Just for a minute, One minute before I die, Promise that you'll never let me go, That you'll hold me forever in your heart, Yet slowly I slip away, Only to be forgotten by everyone I know, To be replaced by a prettier face, GoodBye everyone.

Edna Sweetlove 13-Aug-06/5:56 PM
Goodbye is the happiest word.




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