| Re: everything Zen by crwncka1 |
7-Feb-04/11:27 AM |
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if I where rating my poetry Id say this is my first that deserves a rating above 0... but this art I will master like no other... in the end... hurry up and shit on this... i already did... but beware
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| Re: sea of pearls by crwncka1 |
20-Jan-04/6:46 AM |
too intelligent for any real feedback... come on lamers need constructive critisim
<yawn>
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| Re: 52 card pickup (only a test) by crwncka1 |
14-Jan-04/4:59 AM |
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yep i have reached a higher level of gayness here..... I have to admit...
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| Re: lost it all('ego' totally crushed) by crwncka1 |
5-Jan-04/3:00 AM |
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95% of amercians live in the false 'ego' state... culture/society conditioning of the brain, only removed uncovering all the negative layer by layer via true understanding of it.. took about 18 months of self-dialog/work/poetry 500+ pages for my ego witch was the size of texas.. haha
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| Re: one true love (beta test) by crwncka1 |
2-Jan-04/1:20 PM |
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the past is always over, so now I look toward the future ! what a simple concept
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| Re: merry go around (my brain is now history) by crwncka1 |
30-Dec-03/2:23 AM |
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I wanna one day project a veil of mass confusion on society...... with my work... in its infantcy of meshing now.. heh.
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| Re: secert love by crwncka1 |
24-Dec-03/7:59 AM |
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objective / sujective points of view linked as one to see things truly as they are... sense of dual inner/outer nature is just a veil of illusion used to seperate our existance from the earth, a place of suffering, misery that we our conditioned to blame hopelessly on our planet rather then our very own creation of nature ... the mass truly fooled by central powers of government/authority around the world... that are viewed as 'important' and should be listened too, like our true nature is set to destroy everything of importance if no authority existed to control it... in truth is just a projection of what authority and power is slowly manifesting... destruction of earth-----laugh my ass off
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| Re: ebb flow by crwncka1 |
19-Dec-03/5:01 AM |
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poetry is a creative art that can not be learned... beware
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| Re: thoughts and feelings (draft) by crwncka1 |
1-Dec-03/9:36 PM |
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| Re: truth by crwncka1 |
10-Oct-03/4:01 PM |
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yep 10 on LAME O METER hehe
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| Re: one by crwncka1 |
10-Oct-03/4:00 PM |
yah iam not really much of a writer nothing fancy shamcy just my thoughts
one = all that is
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| Re: Lonely by the_unknown_angel83 |
26-Sep-03/7:35 AM |
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I feel this person... loneliness is acutally a real test of human stregth and sprit... you feel it once then it says... :/
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| Re: Pauling in Disguise (Ignorance and Arrogance) by Geschäftsreise |
26-Sep-03/7:31 AM |
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looks to me like one of those police criminal descriptions
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| Re: a comment on The fetus farm by horus8 |
26-Sep-03/7:27 AM |
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hrm... sounds to me like you might be secertly hiding your kiddie pr0n obession... i mean why is your MIND foucsed on such shit anyway? 13 yr olds are gonna be 13 yr olds...
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| Re: the awakened raven (work in progress!) by crwncka1 |
26-Sep-03/7:14 AM |
what the poem is about
if...
brith=suffering,grief, life is to die
death=celebration,divine,to the great unknown
funny how this got twisted up in mainly relgious thinking, sadism....
when their both exactly the same just different ends of a cycle?
dont get me wrong here...
grief= suffering a loss of someone in your life, mainly, which does absolutely nothing but make things worse... you cannot bring the dead back, so feeling this can do nothing postive.. what every victim loves to leech onto
mouring= memory of the lost one, feelings directed toward them, not back to yourself, the selfish grieving way
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| Re: swamp of devils by crwncka1 |
26-Sep-03/6:44 AM |
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yep maybe I did swill one to many 8oz bottles of robitussin max cough back when (ugh)
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| Re: hells kitchen by crwncka1 |
17-Sep-03/7:51 PM |
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| Re: help me love the U S A by crwncka1 |
17-Sep-03/7:47 PM |
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hey metallicas st anger CD didnt work for me... he loves I hate.... someone please help me, my brain wont suffocate... heh
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| Re: hells atrium by crwncka1 |
28-Aug-03/1:49 PM |
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| Re: soul mate by crwncka1 |
11-Aug-03/2:46 PM |
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hurry up and hate me now :D
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