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52 card pickup (only a test) (Free verse) by crwncka1
now seen just ahead in the distance are never ending meadows, of sunflowers with yellow tops that appear to dance in the wind, that allow the landscape to vibrantly come alive under the sun, burning high in the sky above splashing radiant fields of color, that touch off the scenery in a whole spectrum of bright yellow, shades that draw a perfect picture of harmony found in heaven, the place where my soul has come along way to fully become, one with the source that will allow god to merge in wholeness, the soul with the missing pieces now called to form a union, that manifested in a dream of love now becoming all to real, as seen in the distance coming slowly into focus in a vision, of my lost love running though high meadows back toward me, so close yet so far apart in distance with the gap now closing, in on the final areas of separation now only existing as space, that from a different angle turns to become the force pulling us, together as time has now passed us over and nothing remains, left of the old existence now falling completely away to become, one with the source that our soul now fully integrates with, allowing our nature to become one though pure creative intellect, that forms the compete merger seen only in this special vision, taking out my presence of mind in body to wholly shape the mold, now fully manifesting inward the moment of truth has arrived, in a instant flash of light the eye of my love opens up a vision, now coming back into focus though my vision of the real self, from the intuitive center of knowing or the very heart of nature, as the process now shapes our inner manifested forms as one, from the soul level that now may shape our realm from within, as a picture now comes to mind in full color of my beautiful love, her face seen in khristale clarity now with a smile telling me, that I have touched her heart like no other man has ever done, even though this distance still remains keeping us separate, I need not to worry as the voice in my heart calling her out, she now hears in a moment of still silence a rhythmic force, that our hearts make in tune with the each other now becoming, a rare form of nature soon to reveal a love so close to perfect, that is must be time to capture it like honey from a bee hive, with my breath taken away in a jar with my all my love sealed, in this layer of protection found listening to all my thoughts, of love for you dear in my heart that may form the finished mold, as I listen in tune with our nature the truth now reveals, something that we both felt from the start that has become, though our fears the one desire of our same soul existence, to bring forth the merging of god down fully into the realm, of the conscious mind with nothing otherwise found to matter, the process may now begin to unfold right before my eyes, that now fully see the light under the mystery of true love, discovered in my long journey though the dark underworld, where my trail lead me though sacrifice in search of meaning, now begins to peck away at ice formed in the space that lifts, away the final barrier holding my love and I apart appearing, as the final separating block that across the land becomes, the very shape of heaven under this final straw taken away

Down the ladder: My Shattered Love

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Weighted score: 4.8410625
Overall Rank: 10686
Posted: January 14, 2004 4:58 AM PST; Last modified: January 14, 2004 4:58 AM PST
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[n/a] crwncka1 @ 66.141.118.244 | 14-Jan-04/4:59 AM | Reply
yep i have reached a higher level of gayness here..... I have to admit...
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.209.41 > crwncka1 | 15-Jan-04/6:22 AM | Reply
I read in a book somewhere-"you have to be willing to write badly". It gave no mention of sexual preference. I have not read this. I did count the lines though. Good exercise for you.
[n/a] god'swife @ 71.103.98.44 | 25-Jan-06/9:56 PM | Reply
This is nutty. Nothing makes sense.
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