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Re: soul mate by crwncka1 11-Aug-03/2:46 PM
hurry up and hate me now :D
Re: hells atrium by crwncka1 28-Aug-03/1:49 PM
sucker
Re: help me love the U S A by crwncka1 17-Sep-03/7:47 PM
hey metallicas st anger CD didnt work for me... he loves I hate.... someone please help me, my brain wont suffocate... heh
Re: hells kitchen by crwncka1 17-Sep-03/7:51 PM
i have no clue
regarding some deleted poem... 17-Sep-03/8:09 PM
sex with the tinman?
Re: swamp of devils by crwncka1 26-Sep-03/6:44 AM
yep maybe I did swill one to many 8oz bottles of robitussin max cough back when (ugh)
Re: the awakened raven (work in progress!) by crwncka1 26-Sep-03/7:14 AM
what the poem is about
if...

brith=suffering,grief, life is to die
death=celebration,divine,to the great unknown

funny how this got twisted up in mainly relgious thinking, sadism....

when their both exactly the same just different ends of a cycle?

dont get me wrong here...
grief= suffering a loss of someone in your life, mainly, which does absolutely nothing but make things worse... you cannot bring the dead back, so feeling this can do nothing postive.. what every victim loves to leech onto

mouring= memory of the lost one, feelings directed toward them, not back to yourself, the selfish grieving way
Re: Pauling in Disguise (Ignorance and Arrogance) by Geschäftsreise 26-Sep-03/7:31 AM
looks to me like one of those police criminal descriptions
Re: Lonely by the_unknown_angel83 26-Sep-03/7:35 AM
I feel this person... loneliness is acutally a real test of human stregth and sprit... you feel it once then it says... :/
Re: one by crwncka1 10-Oct-03/4:00 PM
yah iam not really much of a writer nothing fancy shamcy just my thoughts

one = all that is
Re: truth by crwncka1 10-Oct-03/4:01 PM
yep 10 on LAME O METER hehe
Re: thoughts and feelings (draft) by crwncka1 1-Dec-03/9:36 PM
eh?
Re: ebb flow by crwncka1 19-Dec-03/5:01 AM
poetry is a creative art that can not be learned... beware
Re: secert love by crwncka1 24-Dec-03/7:59 AM
objective / sujective points of view linked as one to see things truly as they are... sense of dual inner/outer nature is just a veil of illusion used to seperate our existance from the earth, a place of suffering, misery that we our conditioned to blame hopelessly on our planet rather then our very own creation of nature ... the mass truly fooled by central powers of government/authority around the world... that are viewed as 'important' and should be listened too, like our true nature is set to destroy everything of importance if no authority existed to control it... in truth is just a projection of what authority and power is slowly manifesting... destruction of earth-----laugh my ass off
Re: merry go around (my brain is now history) by crwncka1 30-Dec-03/2:23 AM
I wanna one day project a veil of mass confusion on society...... with my work... in its infantcy of meshing now.. heh.
Re: one true love (beta test) by crwncka1 2-Jan-04/1:20 PM
the past is always over, so now I look toward the future ! what a simple concept
Re: lost it all('ego' totally crushed) by crwncka1 5-Jan-04/3:00 AM
95% of amercians live in the false 'ego' state... culture/society conditioning of the brain, only removed uncovering all the negative layer by layer via true understanding of it.. took about 18 months of self-dialog/work/poetry 500+ pages for my ego witch was the size of texas.. haha
Re: 52 card pickup (only a test) by crwncka1 14-Jan-04/4:59 AM
yep i have reached a higher level of gayness here..... I have to admit...
Re: sea of pearls by crwncka1 20-Jan-04/6:46 AM
too intelligent for any real feedback... come on lamers need constructive critisim

<yawn>
Re: everything Zen by crwncka1 7-Feb-04/11:27 AM
if I where rating my poetry Id say this is my first that deserves a rating above 0... but this art I will master like no other... in the end... hurry up and shit on this... i already did... but beware


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