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help me love the U S A (Free verse) by crwncka1
so here i am, in one nation of dumbfounded, hocus focus quick fix, fear induced mass of, egoistical material driven, swarm of yellow larva, that I see crawling everywhere, blaming, complaining, and law suiting, always looking for someone, to fix their broken down, pitiful victimized by something, thing they call a life, yet never realizing, that they actually create, all things that occur, good, bad, sorry, or evil, in the existence they breathe, but certainly it is much easier, to blame someone else, or look for help, in a cyst hole of religious dip shits, for something of meaning, as their all government controlled, trained to be a mass, of roaches following the blind, under a veil of injustice, so cleverly hid by right and wrong, the ever looping distraction, never to be found as, their simply is no answer, to all of the silly shit we do, that makes us fattier and lazier, always smarter yet dumber, trained to destroy aliens, to the things that really matter, like say the real truth, about who we really are, but lies, lies, damn lies, are such a comfort to cover, up your average fake, phony, creepy, American citizen who thinks, a fucking automobile will give him, all of the freedom he needs, in this hopeless down filled world, of scrap and twisted junk metal, stupid ass silly worthless shit, so hurry up and hate this please suckers!

Up the ladder: Breathe

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6
Weighted score: 5.0715218
Overall Rank: 6557
Posted: September 17, 2003 7:38 PM PDT; Last modified: September 17, 2003 7:38 PM PDT
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[n/a] crwncka1 @ 67.30.34.52 | 17-Sep-03/7:47 PM | Reply
hey metallicas st anger CD didnt work for me... he loves I hate.... someone please help me, my brain wont suffocate... heh
[8] richa @ 81.178.249.169 | 18-Sep-03/5:39 AM | Reply
all dogma and unargued but I quite like this.

Makes you think, has a good pace, better variety of language than usual
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