| Re: a comment on bad boy taylor by rosiebailey |
4-Nov-02/11:54 AM |
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this ain't no super-anythang
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| Re: untitled by bluwiz |
4-Nov-02/11:52 AM |
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is this about coal? are you welsh?
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| Re: a comment on I Love You, My Angel by mytenderrage |
4-Nov-02/11:49 AM |
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as if they'll ever go away.
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| Re: HATE by Blade |
4-Nov-02/11:47 AM |
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WOW. THIS IS THE MOST AMAZING POEM EVER SUBMITTED ON THIS SITE. WE ARE NOT WORTHY. LET'S ALL SLICE OUR OWN HEADS OFF AND BE DONE WITH IT! (then we wouldn't waste our time reading this crap.)
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| Re: Something Must Be by Birdman42s |
4-Nov-02/11:27 AM |
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again, seek the aid of a qualified dispenser of pharmaceuticals...
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| Re: Down Again by Birdman42s |
4-Nov-02/11:26 AM |
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prescription drugs can solve this for you, birdman
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| Re: Untitled by vulcan |
4-Nov-02/11:23 AM |
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these are disjointed images splattered about, with a hint cohesiveness to them. but not enough, and not pleasantly so. finish the thought. weave it together.
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| Re: Bedside Angel by feathers68 |
4-Nov-02/11:20 AM |
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| Re: Alien by Mutant_X |
4-Nov-02/11:19 AM |
if you made all those errors on purpose, i'd think you had something.
you don't.
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| Re: Got Balls? by Yardbird |
4-Nov-02/8:53 AM |
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is self-consumption your passion? have a glass of milk, and BTW chocolate is yummy on most body parts.
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| Re: untitled by PunchMeInTheFace |
4-Nov-02/8:45 AM |
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that's not what i dreamed of a a youth,but whatever.
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| Re: a comment on A Cold Day in March by PunchMeInTheFace |
4-Nov-02/8:45 AM |
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i agree with limonade. i also thik she is using her words to drown out her fears, perhaps weaving her own CLOAKE OF SORROWE???
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| Re: fading by PunchMeInTheFace |
4-Nov-02/8:43 AM |
hoe could you have wasted this potential: :Why don't you to stay here a while?
(forever)"
arg.
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| Re: Stranger by feathers68 |
4-Nov-02/8:42 AM |
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why don't you introduce yourself to her?
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| Re: Cold Set by feathers68 |
4-Nov-02/8:41 AM |
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would like it better if it read: 'as behind iced farts whores enraged', but that's just me...
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| Re: Three pointed star by INTRANSIT |
4-Nov-02/8:40 AM |
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| Re: arise by daniella |
4-Nov-02/8:39 AM |
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finally! a poem that both tempts and delivers! nice effort.
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| Re: St. Andrews University Marxist Society by Nicholas Jones |
4-Nov-02/8:14 AM |
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| Re: a comment on crime scene (not for the weak!) by t_t_redhot |
4-Nov-02/8:06 AM |
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so, why not try and convey some of that? why not DESCRIBE what you see, instead of just telling us about it? i'm not trying to be belligerent, but this is a good idea for a poem and it is disappointing that you have done nothing to develop it. just saying 'i do this, and i see shocking sights' means nothing, changes nothing, shares nothing. why bother?
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| Re: a comment on crime scene (not for the weak!) by t_t_redhot |
4-Nov-02/7:45 AM |
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in this poem, i see you, an EMT running around evaluating who lives and who is past hope. what did i not understand?
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