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Something Must Be (Free verse) by Birdman42s
Something Must Be
Something must be wrong with me
with all this hurt inside,
always bursting with anger,
and never any pride.
Something must be wrong with me
if all I do is cry,
I can't stop this pain
all I want to do is die.
Something must be wrong with me
if my emotions run wild,
all this confusion does
is make me feel like a lost child.
Something must be wrong with me
with all these terrible things,
always there and never gone
depression is what it brings.
Something must be wrong with me
if I can't stop these thoughts,
all this pain does
is turn my stomach in knots.
Something is truly wrong with me
when I think there's only one way out,
by letting this pain end
only I can decide when
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.8461537
Weighted score: 6.3496466
Overall Rank: 832
Posted: November 2, 2002 10:45 PM PST; Last modified: November 2, 2002 10:45 PM PST
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