| Re: a comment on Mom by nothingtoanyone |
8-May-04/6:19 PM |
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No because your letting her know how you feel
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| Re: Everyone by nothingtoanyone |
8-May-04/6:16 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Astronomical by DeadtotheWorld |
1-Apr-04/6:08 PM |
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I wasn't trying to rhythm, more like tell a story and get a message across
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| Re: a comment on Astronomical by DeadtotheWorld |
31-Mar-04/8:09 PM |
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yeah sorry about that format
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| Re: a comment on The Destination of the Unborn Child by DeadtotheWorld |
12-Mar-04/7:49 PM |
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Thanks man, by the way your poetry is awesome.
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| Re: The Sipping of the Light by DeadtotheWorld |
21-Feb-04/8:05 PM |
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It's a poem about hiding because I don't want someone to take away what I have, and the light is symbolizing this person
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| Re: Audrey's poem by DeadtotheWorld |
9-Jan-04/10:28 PM |
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I just want to say I wrote this poem, mainly to tell my girlfriend how I feel about her. So please if you comment try not to make it negative, because This poem was written from the heart and like my emotions for her are strong.
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| Re: Limmerick, Starring Andy by MuDvAyNe |
14-Nov-03/9:20 PM |
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| Re: Okay, so it doesn't actually work, it's still shit-funny... by Yardbird |
14-Nov-03/9:19 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Left Alone for Happiness by DeadtotheWorld |
12-Nov-03/8:47 PM |
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well this poem means that disasters can strike when least expected, you might lose it all, but you won't lose it without a fight even if it cost you your life
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| Re: Not Real by DeadtotheWorld |
27-Aug-03/10:15 PM |
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This poem is about things that are happening and in which they should be the opposite of what is actucally happening, Hince the name "Not Real."
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| Re: a comment on Good prevails by DeadtotheWorld |
1-Jul-03/7:50 PM |
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Alright the odd thing is, I respect you and your work, inspite of the way you just thrash on poeple and their work, whatever man its still cool
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| Re: a comment on Forsaken Faults by DeadtotheWorld |
30-Jun-03/12:00 PM |
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yeah ok I know i have to be more creative thanx for the info, good looking out
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| Re: a comment on Forsaken Faults by DeadtotheWorld |
29-Jun-03/11:20 PM |
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Well this poem basically mean this bum wasted his life he could have been a scientist and it was just his dream and it will never happen
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| Re: a comment on Forsaken Faults by DeadtotheWorld |
29-Jun-03/8:35 PM |
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| Re: a comment on The truths of war by DeadtotheWorld |
18-Jun-03/11:19 PM |
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Yah thanx for the heads up on that
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| Re: Hot Potato by Shardik |
18-Jun-03/10:02 PM |
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7 man this made me laugh for some reason it's good tho
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| Re: a comment on Bad Timing by DeadtotheWorld |
4-Jun-03/7:34 PM |
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Dude I'm dead to the world because I like to write sad stuff but like it also sounds prett kewl, and I can talk to you becuase they have the internet in hell.
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| Re: a comment on Bad Timing by DeadtotheWorld |
3-Jun-03/8:50 PM |
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lmao, I have no idea what that really means, but dude I respect you nonetheless
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| Re: The Blooding by Mr Pig |
30-May-03/11:32 PM |
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Very few words cam describe how beautiful this poem, yet i don't know those words. 10
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