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Free verse № 53377

The truths of war

by DeadtotheWorld

Member since 2003 · Posted 18 Jun 2003 · 6 comments

Unspoken truths about are enemies Deceiving the boundaries of are falling comrades Seeking yet striking into battle without trepidation Longing for another attack of the unworthy Liberating are freedoms for the artificial rights Contemplating to attack the additional forces Just to unveil they weren’t the corrected justice For they were the ones who recruited us Those are the ones that tear us apart Uncle Sam did nothing for me So why should I do in return He caused the pains and the suffering To the millions of families around the world Justice and freedom he says what we fight for, Right, then we become power hungry for more

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6 comments

[n/a] Shardik 18-Jun-03/10:00 PM Reply
Yes.
[10] LosT SykoPath 18-Jun-03/10:24 PM Reply
dude anarchy power...man that was tight
[n/a] OneFingerAnswer 18-Jun-03/11:16 PM Reply
Are = our
[n/a] DeadtotheWorld › OneFingerAnswer 18-Jun-03/11:19 PM Reply
Yah thanx for the heads up on that
[n/a] richa 19-Jun-03/10:09 AM Reply
language perhaps loses its own power as it is phrased in 'anarchy movement' terms.

I think the best types of these poems are perhaps a bit more subversive
[1] horus8 25-May-04/6:54 PM Reply
Why is this on the best list?
You don't even know the difference between
"our" and "are"? If you're going to have shit grammar, do it
with some imagination could you? liken me does
you asshat.