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Mom (Free verse) by nothingtoanyone
Were connected in more ways then one. We should talk more then we do but don’t because life leads us away. Strength is something we need to find not in each other for that is a lost hope but in the future for that can still be saved. I end this little note with something that needs to be said, “Happy Mother’s Day.” Even you never stay when you should. Love, You Daughter P.S Maybe next time you’ll turn around and face the things that are most difficult in your life for those are the things you should face first.

Up the ladder: To Talitha
Down the ladder: Potato hail

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6
Weighted score: 5.190725
Overall Rank: 4677
Posted: May 8, 2004 6:17 PM PDT; Last modified: May 8, 2004 6:17 PM PDT
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[n/a] nothingtoanyone @ 63.184.72.71 | 8-May-04/6:18 PM | Reply
I wrote this for my Mother who I'm not on good terms with do you think it was too mean to give as a Mother's Day gift?
[10] DeadtotheWorld @ 12.72.80.61 > nothingtoanyone | 8-May-04/6:19 PM | Reply
No because your letting her know how you feel
[n/a] PunkyPanda @ 65.125.114.157 > nothingtoanyone | 27-May-04/9:59 AM | Reply
Audrey, we are SO going to Chicago even if it involves ducttape, rope, you and my trunk, we're still going!
[10] Stephen Robins @ 213.146.148.199 | 10-May-04/1:16 AM | Reply
An endearingly heartfelt guff.
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