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Left Alone for Happiness (Lyric) by DeadtotheWorld
Death comes easy and now you see Your life can end in an instant It's a tragedy, You just watch as bombs explode One can land next to you And you've got nothing to hold Just remember what I told, yah And always be bold Face fear in its eyes Now do as you're told Get up, Sit down Fight for what's right And everything will be alright Hell, even I'll be fine Loneliness isn't cool it's divine Sweet and tender kisses Will no longer float your boat Until you let go what you already have Disappointing mishaps is what you need to grasp And now I leave you alas

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8333335
Weighted score: 5.2241178
Overall Rank: 4267
Posted: May 27, 2003 9:21 PM PDT; Last modified: May 27, 2003 9:21 PM PDT
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[10] nothingtoanyone @ 63.183.232.237 | 12-Nov-03/8:43 PM | Reply
do you mean that you just dont care you just want to leave as in dieing?
[n/a] DeadtotheWorld @ 12.72.84.174 > nothingtoanyone | 12-Nov-03/8:47 PM | Reply
well this poem means that disasters can strike when least expected, you might lose it all, but you won't lose it without a fight even if it cost you your life
[10] nothingtoanyone @ 65.177.241.142 | 13-Nov-03/3:09 PM | Reply
oh ok its all clear now nice i like it even more now that i know what its intenden to mean.perfect 10
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