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Life begins when you graduate H.S. (Haiku) by INTRANSIT
You have been bested, and in your mind it festers. Testing your mettle.
Up the ladder: Left Alone for Happiness
Down the ladder: In (ghazal)
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.8333335
Weighted score: 5.2241178
Overall Rank: 4268
Posted: June 3, 2003 1:00 PM PDT; Last modified: June 3, 2003 1:00 PM PDT
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[7] richa @ 195.92.67.68 | 3-Jun-03/1:19 PM | Reply
I like rap wordplay but it sometimes seems a bit freestyle and craftless

A haiku however is a good compromise
[10] loneshadow29 @ 63.80.251.74 | 4-Jun-03/1:20 PM | Reply
good read... nuff said
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