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Audrey's poem (Free verse) by DeadtotheWorld
It's like when everthing else is bad and nothing else could go wrong, ... but in the end it does, I think of you, ... why I don't know I just do Maybe it's because I feel for you, like no one has before I want to walk with you and hold you in my arms, Feel your body against mine as we walk and past time When I'm with you Theirs nothing I wanna do because To me their's nothing more important then you Mainly because I'm madly in love you, I'm head over heels At least,I don' t think any guy would know how my heart feels I'll try to explain it in words even though I know I can't Here we go....... Sweaty palms in nervousness can't effect me Because you make me feel at home It's easy to be around you, I don't have to try, I just Do whatever comes to mind to pleasure you the best and have you home by supper time If it were up to me their no other place I would rather be But besides you, hand in hand when you need me for your problems I'll always will be here even if a state is inbewteen us I care you for you more then anyone I have ever in my life If I were old enough and you were too I would propose to you and make you my wife And yes Audrey you know All this is true cuss deep down this is how I feel for you Your the reason I get up in the morning, your the reason the sky is blue You make this world a better place, you and your great smile I bet your sexy all the time even if your in denial.

Up the ladder: WAIT UNTIL THE END
Down the ladder: Birdcalls

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.142857
Weighted score: 5.576303
Overall Rank: 2399
Posted: January 9, 2004 10:25 PM PST; Last modified: January 9, 2004 10:25 PM PST
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[n/a] DeadtotheWorld @ 12.72.84.247 | 9-Jan-04/10:28 PM | Reply
I just want to say I wrote this poem, mainly to tell my girlfriend how I feel about her. So please if you comment try not to make it negative, because This poem was written from the heart and like my emotions for her are strong.
[5] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.116.54 | 11-Jan-04/12:19 PM | Reply
Didn't get through the first line, as usual.
[10] PunkyPanda @ 65.125.114.157 | 12-Jan-04/10:15 AM | Reply
Yeah, I'm Audrey's very besttest friend,Kristy, might I say, one of your best,Anthony!
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