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WAIT UNTIL THE END (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1 I felt my body break as i fell to the ground
It cracked and broke with a snap of air
my head almost weightless hit with a smack
Good bye world i will never see you again
The air was cold as i began to shut my eyes
Only to feel my soul die and never live again.
Up the ladder:
Glorious Turncoat, I Shall Return
Down the ladder:
Audrey's poem
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Posted: February 3, 2005 4:39 PM PST; Last modified: February 3, 2005 4:39 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.576303 Overall Rank: 2398 Comments:
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7-Feb-05/6:21 PM
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