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WAIT UNTIL THE END (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1
I felt my body break as i fell to the ground It cracked and broke with a snap of air my head almost weightless hit with a smack Good bye world i will never see you again The air was cold as i began to shut my eyes Only to feel my soul die and never live again.
Up the ladder: Written while Kayaking
Down the ladder: Alfredo
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.142857
Weighted score: 5.576303
Overall Rank: 2402
Posted: February 3, 2005 4:39 PM PST; Last modified: February 3, 2005 4:39 PM PST
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[10] deleted user @ 68.7.189.144 | 7-Feb-05/6:21 PM | Reply
this is pretty good
[10] deleted user @ 68.7.189.144 | 7-Feb-05/6:22 PM | Reply
this is pretty good
[10] deleted user @ 68.7.189.144 | 7-Feb-05/6:22 PM | Reply
this is pretty good
[n/a] deleted user @ 81.69.23.196 | 19-Jun-05/5:16 PM | Reply
This is pretty shitty
[n/a] deleted user @ 81.69.23.196 | 19-Jun-05/5:17 PM | Reply
This is pretty shitty
[n/a] deleted user @ 81.69.23.196 | 19-Jun-05/5:17 PM | Reply
This is pretty shitty.

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