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WAIT UNTIL THE END (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1

I felt my body break as i fell to the ground It cracked and broke with a snap of air my head almost weightless hit with a smack Good bye world i will never see you again The air was cold as i began to shut my eyes Only to feel my soul die and never live again.

girlcrazychelsea 7-Feb-05/6:22 PM
this is pretty good




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