Re: Where's heaven? by cleverdevice	12-Apr-03/12:34 PM
Well said.
Re: bottoms up by suckmychucks	9-Apr-03/12:38 PM
Witty.
Re: Feeling the dark by Mutant_X	11-Apr-03/10:08 PM
Been There ALOT. -10-
Re: Damaged By 'Weakness' by Mr Pig	11-Apr-03/10:55 PM
Excellent on so many levels. 10 in my eyes.
Re: What Hobbit songs are really like... by Bobjim	11-Apr-03/10:57 PM
Fine Fine Weed That You Smoke -9-
Re: Never get it right by Mutant_X	11-Apr-03/10:01 PM
The wording at the end is a bit confusing. Try keeping to one tense per line(i.e. and why everything we did or said just hurts us more) either drop the s on hurts or change did and said to do or say. Lose the "it" and/or the "right" in the last line. They just muddle your point.
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Apr-03/12:33 PM
plagiarist
Re: A prayer for my mum by Mr Pig (again)	12-Apr-03/8:14 AM
I'm not a big fan of parents but this almost brings tears to my eyes. Very well written. It feels heart felt. Worthy of many more, a -10-!!!
Re: RSPCA got here just a likkle bit late... by Yardbird	12-Apr-03/12:31 PM
If the Judge doesn't give 20 years I'll bust out my garden shears And stick'em up your rear :) -7-
Re: The Warriors Song by cleverdevice	12-Apr-03/12:39 PM
Too much D&D for some body.
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Apr-03/12:41 PM
War leads to hell but whose hell are we headed to?
Re: Okay, so it doesn't actually work, it's still shit-funny... by Yardbird	12-Apr-03/12:28 PM
I'm in stiches Cause of those bitches!! -8-
Re: Porno by Bobjim_returns	9-Apr-03/4:25 PM
NO DON'T GO!!!! OH THE HORROR, THE HORROR!!!! ;( Is it just me or did D.A. look like he hit his own prostate?
regarding some deleted poem...	7-Apr-03/6:57 PM
Yeah I agree. It sux major hanus so many hours lost. Why do farmers need daylight saving? They get up at the crack of dawn anyway. -9-
Re: All the things i hate by Mutant_X	11-Apr-03/9:52 PM
Somebody has been to block buster recently. Sounds a little too close to the movie. There are only 9 I hates tho. Why not add one and be that much closer?
Re: Nothin lasts by Mutant_X	11-Apr-03/10:22 PM
I think this sounds alot like some of your other work but still very touching
Re: ode to an english teacher by suckmychucks	10-Apr-03/5:16 PM
Why all the limericks?? Why must you shame the irish so?
Re: two flies by suckmychucks	10-Apr-03/5:10 PM
Not Very Witty Not Clever Enough to Be Gay A horrible piece I'm forced to say I wasn't amused in the least little bit Whining worse than even me Which is hard I'll admit A zero I'm afraid it has to be Thats all you get
Re: I can't write by Mutant_X	11-Apr-03/10:40 PM
I wouldn't say that just not well
Re: God's Gift by Mutant_X	11-Apr-03/10:39 PM
I read this and You just seem to be repeating your other works. No new thought, no New way of expressing the same thought.