Re: You Say by adrenalize	12-Apr-03/12:45 PM
Shame shame you have my permission to beat them with an old photo frame(no new ones cause why was something new) to the point of unconsiousness but no further! Its over when the lights go out! You Hear me! There are limits to how far you can go even when some one is that big an ANUS.
Re: Severe Acute Respiratory Syndrome by Stephen Robins	12-Apr-03/12:47 PM
Take me with you.
Re: Flash of Light by Todd	14-Apr-03/12:45 PM
To best see the light one must stand in shadow
Re: You by adrenalize	14-Apr-03/12:47 PM
well said -7-
Re: Friends by anitawit	14-Apr-03/12:50 PM
A few typos(i didn't take off for them but they are there). Other than that nothing that really makes it stand out, but its still good. -7-
Re: a 9,000.00$ Philippine script treatment by Shardik	14-Apr-03/1:02 PM
Nice screen play. It seems to center more on Emilio than Ferdinand tho. So why is Ferdinand the PRINCIPAL CHARACTER?
Re: The Smarts aint Stupids by Shardik	14-Apr-03/1:07 PM
My first reaction :WTF: My second reaction :what the bloody fuck: My third reaction :what a fuck: My fourth reaction :awe fuck If I'm this confused give it a -10- and try and sort it out later:
Re: My pimp's ceiling fan by Shardik	14-Apr-03/1:23 PM
Once again confusing and I can feel my brain going into the redline so before it explodes -9-
Re: "E-V-O-L" by seven	14-Apr-03/6:59 PM
*hacks up a furball* huh?? hmmm??? wha? is it over yet? You lost my attention, about halfway through the first, Stanza/paragraph. It maybe the subject but It feels really repetive, like I've heard it before, redundent, cliche, and so on and so forth and what have ya. It might also be helpful if I could tell if you were being sarcastic with the live=evil rip off, or if you just thought it'd be cute and clever. I see that some effort was put forth(one way or another) and cause I have a real hard time with giving a zero to anything that has some effort, just for you a -2-.
Re: In Debt by talking_goldfish	18-Apr-03/12:39 PM
Just strange.
Re: Deceased by talking_goldfish	18-Apr-03/12:43 PM
Sounds alot like something Mr.Pig wrote that I liked. -8-
Re: Shadow by talking_goldfish	18-Apr-03/12:45 PM
I like how you stick to one subject but this isn't all that great. -5-
Re: Rainbow Tears by talking_goldfish	18-Apr-03/12:49 PM
K big guy, but the try in "Try Drop Your pain forever more, Night Falls To lose you in yourself," Is that supposed to tears? -4-
Re: NUDIST FLEET by talking_goldfish	18-Apr-03/12:50 PM
Huh?
Re: Toute ma Vie by talking_goldfish	18-Apr-03/12:52 PM
Je ne parle pas francais.
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Apr-03/12:57 PM
Confusing. I get the impression of birth in the first 2 stanzas but I don't feel that follows thru to the rest of the poem. So is this about a baby or a lover? Either way its lovely. -9-
Re: Sweet Dreams by d35	18-Apr-03/1:03 PM
This tale of suicide could use a little work. Connect the events. -7-
Re: Overdose by Miggy	21-Apr-03/10:26 AM
Whom ever sings this song must be taking it slow or have some really good diction to thier voice. For a song about being hungover I found it to be a little wordy to tell the truth. I really suggest going over it again and maybe doing a 2nd draft. -7-
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Apr-03/7:26 PM
A poem(much as I hate to start this arguement again) is a group of words artfully aranged together to convey an Idea. At least thats the best I can figure it. By the way this is well done. -10-
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Apr-03/7:34 PM
I feel guilty now for every blowjob I have ever recieved.