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Toute ma Vie (Free verse) by talking_goldfish Jâaime le monde en que je suis,
Câest parce que vous êtes ici,
Tous les fleurs
Tous les fleurs,
Ils à vous écoutent,
Tout le monde,
Tout le monde,
Ils à vous écoutent,
Tous les jours je me lève en regardant vos sourire;
Je peut sourire.
Une personne.
Une raisone.
Un amour.
Up the ladder:
Worshipping the Porclin God
Down the ladder:
Obscene, or is it?
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Posted: April 17, 2003 4:51 PM PDT; Last modified: April 17, 2003 4:51 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.970199 Overall Rank: 8401 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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god'swife @ 209.179.135.100
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17-Apr-03/5:55 PM
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Very sweet. Somebody kiss me.
Indeed. Has anyone ever had to listen to hours of contemporary French music before? It's hell.
8 I think.
Thanks. Glad you like it.
That's okay. Nice to see some adventure in the poetry on this site. Now we know that you can do this try to do something more extravagent. You're obviously talented at this, so give me something to smile about!
Good evening (over here it is anyway)!
Ah, I see you're from bonny ol' Britain too! Good evening then!
Je ne parle pas francais.
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