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Free verse № 46950

Worshipping the Porclin God

Member since 2003 · Posted 11 Apr 2003 · 3 comments

Salty, Salty water gag myself snotty nose foam in water blowing nose "Just so long as your having fun" burbbbb spit Running in place Running from Jesus It's hard Looking in the mirror Crying heard from the distance lifting up Going where needed

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[n/a] INTRANSIT 11-Apr-03/10:27 AM Reply
and people accuse me of posting thinly.
[7] nentwined 11-Apr-03/3:11 PM Reply
All I can say is... strange. It does have a certain something to it.
[9] little_big_nose 2-Jan-04/5:40 PM Reply
This was fun to read and I really liked it