| Re: you will feel by nentwined |
27-Mar-03/5:02 PM |
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I must say I thought that was going to be good just from your first line but nope. Not really sure what went wrong but it ended up a trainwreck. -3-
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| Re: Iterated Fuck by nentwined |
27-Mar-03/5:15 PM |
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Ewww... I never I should have quit reading after the sex but no I thought there will be more sex and then I was like sweet a blow job but then Curiousity got the best of me Anal Ewww... this would be a 60 rounded down to 10 cause there is nothing higher than a 10 but you just lost 51 points for anal enjoy your 9
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| Re: with no words to write (v2) by nentwined |
27-Mar-03/5:17 PM |
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| Re: One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined |
27-Mar-03/5:31 PM |
Tick Tock Tick Tock, The Ever Running Clock
At the chime It will be 7 o'clock
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| Re: Perversions 7: Viva Las Naked by razorgrin |
29-Mar-03/7:37 AM |
Glad your working on new peversions but... I agree these aren't your best but I realise it must be a hard to come up unusal fetishes and five line ways to describe them. -8-
P.S. I know someone who can do the last one. He says it gives him a cramp in the neck.
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| Re: Is This Love by intheailse |
29-Mar-03/7:47 AM |
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Oh dear child. I had hoped I'd never have to explain this to anyone ever again. Its not love if you have to ask!! Not to mention you give no detail, nadda, none. This is for all intents and purposes a look at the thoughts inside a teenage adolesant mind. Your giving us shallow thoughts with nothing to base them on. No concept of a landscape inside your head or much less of the world around you. If this isn't the worst poem ever written I'll bet its close. -0-
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| Re: Red Skies and Thunderflies by intheailse |
29-Mar-03/7:50 AM |
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| Re: Distant at best by Crakyamuni |
29-Mar-03/7:55 AM |
Huh? If? Wha? Nevermind confused. It seems to make sense to me but something is nagging at me about it. -10-
till I figure out what it is(that could take awhile) :)
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| Re: sorry, but i am lame by nolan |
29-Mar-03/7:59 AM |
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Hmmm... Amazingly not too lame. In fact I ratter liked it. -9-
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| Re: dazed by nolan |
29-Mar-03/8:03 AM |
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Wasn't expecting the ending. You slipped that one right past me. Though it makes sense. -9-
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| Re: Guitar Lesson by Dancer |
29-Mar-03/8:06 AM |
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29-Mar-03/10:34 AM |
Hahahaha thump Hahahahahaha
I fell out of my chair I was laughing so hard. Here -10- before I fall again. LMAO
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| Re: Prayer for Peace by razorgrin |
4-Apr-03/3:50 PM |
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| Re: Last Nightâs Dream (Freud-o-riffic) by razorgrin |
4-Apr-03/3:53 PM |
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| Re: All hail Discordia?(a true haiku story) by razorgrin |
4-Apr-03/3:58 PM |
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You should have that looked into smiley. You might wkae up only to find that dream of falling off a cliff to be true -9-.
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4-Apr-03/4:01 PM |
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Disturbing. Well done but extremly disturbing -7-
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
4-Apr-03/4:07 PM |
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I would if I could but I'm broke and The doc says that my insurance only covers me so long as I never use it so sorry.
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| Re: Our Sweet Lady Lispalot by lunar |
5-Apr-03/12:47 PM |
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I'd jutht like to thay thatth thwell! -9-
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| Re: isms and ities by Amelia |
7-Apr-03/5:12 PM |
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Awefully pretentious claim in your fourth stanza other than not bad -7-
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| Re: Morning Gory by Bobjim |
7-Apr-03/6:44 PM |
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See now isn't it just like mommy always said. If you play with it too much.... Hey Your Supposed to be blind not have it fall off wtf?
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