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Guitar Lesson (Free verse) by Dancer
You smoke your cigarette in disgust Pondering why did you start You put it out in the ash tray by your feet And start strumming at your quitar stings Soke is still left in the air And you can't get the tune on your guitar right Or your fingers placed You joke around Asking me why did you start playing guitar I told you Because you were trying to quit smoking

Up the ladder: buried in california
Down the ladder: Waking Up

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6
Weighted score: 4.3
Overall Rank: 13126
Posted: March 28, 2003 10:12 AM PST; Last modified: March 28, 2003 10:12 AM PST
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Comments:
[7] OneFingerAnswer @ 216.138.10.3 | 28-Mar-03/10:17 AM | Reply
Line five: Smoke

The rest: Good stuff.
[6] Shardik @ 24.126.113.154 | 28-Mar-03/10:41 AM | Reply
That's why nixon started drinking scotch too.
[7] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.19.37 | 29-Mar-03/8:06 AM | Reply
Good Times, Good Times
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