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Guitar Lesson

Member since 2003 · Posted 28 Mar 2003 · 3 comments

You smoke your cigarette in disgust Pondering why did you start You put it out in the ash tray by your feet And start strumming at your quitar stings Soke is still left in the air And you can't get the tune on your guitar right Or your fingers placed You joke around Asking me why did you start playing guitar I told you Because you were trying to quit smoking

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3 comments

[7] OneFingerAnswer 28-Mar-03/10:17 AM Reply
Line five: Smoke

The rest: Good stuff.
[6] Shardik 28-Mar-03/10:41 AM Reply
That's why nixon started drinking scotch too.
[7] thepinkbunnyofdoom 29-Mar-03/8:06 AM Reply
Good Times, Good Times