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Guitar Lesson (Free verse) by Dancer
You smoke your cigarette in disgust
Pondering why did you start
You put it out in the ash tray by your feet
And start strumming at your quitar stings
Soke is still left in the air
And you can't get the tune on your guitar right
Or your fingers placed
You joke around
Asking me why did you start playing guitar
I told you
Because you were trying to quit smoking
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6
Weighted score: 4.3
Overall Rank: 13131
Posted: March 28, 2003 10:12 AM PST; Last modified: March 28, 2003 10:12 AM PST
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