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Is This Love (Lyric) by intheailse Everytime i see her,
I'm on fire,
She looks so good,
everyime.
Is this love?
I'm not sure,
I've never felt,
like this before.
It's all you need,
someone said......
I think it's my turn,
instead.
Is this love?
Will it show?
Sonn enough,
I will know.
Up the ladder:
Snow-White
Down the ladder:
Harry Potter and the philosophers stone
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Posted: March 28, 2003 9:35 AM PST; Last modified: March 28, 2003 9:35 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.001075 Overall Rank: 13374 Comments:
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spank me baby yeah @ 195.92.194.13
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28-Mar-03/11:10 AM
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fuck off
Good grief.
Oh dear child. I had hoped I'd never have to explain this to anyone ever again. Its not love if you have to ask!! Not to mention you give no detail, nadda, none. This is for all intents and purposes a look at the thoughts inside a teenage adolesant mind. Your giving us shallow thoughts with nothing to base them on. No concept of a landscape inside your head or much less of the world around you. If this isn't the worst poem ever written I'll bet its close. -0-
Did you just try to rhyme "fire" with "time"? Good Lord.
The only thing worse than a poem that insists on rhyming is a poem that insists on rhyming and fails. 163 view(s)
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