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Is This Love (Lyric) by intheailse

Everytime i see her, I'm on fire, She looks so good, everyime. Is this love? I'm not sure, I've never felt, like this before. It's all you need, someone said...... I think it's my turn, instead. Is this love? Will it show? Sonn enough, I will know.

thepinkbunnyofdoom 29-Mar-03/7:47 AM
Oh dear child. I had hoped I'd never have to explain this to anyone ever again. Its not love if you have to ask!! Not to mention you give no detail, nadda, none. This is for all intents and purposes a look at the thoughts inside a teenage adolesant mind. Your giving us shallow thoughts with nothing to base them on. No concept of a landscape inside your head or much less of the world around you. If this isn't the worst poem ever written I'll bet its close. -0-




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